Manga 145429 Kimi Ja Nakya Dame Na Dorei Shoujo Suggestion

6.8/10


There’s nothing inherently wrong with this manga because it’s not filled to the brim with erotica nor does it force character development or introduction. However, there’s also not much going for it, as the wholesome moments aren’t wholesome (?) enough due to the relatively below industry standard art and ambiance of each chapter.

I wish there was more of an emphasis on sole character growth rather than the author half@ssing both of the lead’s details because of this, the interest within this story also falls a bit short due to the fmc not having a well-defined personality along with the lack of plot progression.

There’s ... just something off putting about this manga that I can’t really explain well. Instead of a cutesy romance story with a reverse isekai, it’s more like a doctor treating a nursing home patient rather than a love story.


Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired & A Huang Teizan Original)
10 – God’s penmanship
9 – Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 – Instant bookmark
7 – Entertaining
6 – Good to pass time
5 – Why are you reading this?
4 – Bad.
3 – Typical garbage.
2 – My head hurts.
1 – Retirement is a thought.
0 – “Did they even give you a story?!”

So the story goes as the MC (Takasaki Hiroto) comes back home as usual only to find something unusual. A girl with a slave collar on her neck was sleeping in his house near the entrance. The FMC (which he names Berna) has supposedly come from a fantasy land. She is not able to speak the Human language and treats the MC is her master.

Well there are not much chapters out yet but I will still try to sort Pros and Cons based on my experience reading this.

Cons:-
Premise: Well premise is not something new as there are a lot more "taking care of a slave ... girl/women from past/ otherworldly woman" etc. It shares a little similarity to a game named "Teaching Feeling".

Plot: The manga starts with some pretty wobbly and cringey chapters but it toned down a little bit shortly after a few chapters. The main issue is the subplot which was the MC striving to become a doctor. The only time he is studying is in 1-2 chapter out of the 21 chapters released at the time of writing. The subplot kinda got lost in all this slave girl chaos, And I would love to see the journey of him becoming a successful doctor so I wish they focus a little more on the subplot.

Another one is that it is a Harem manga. Two are type of confirmed in love and another one will likely fall for him. So if you are not looking for some Harem drama then you should avoid it.

MC: The MC can be overreactive at times on short things screaming and gets embarrassed too often. But its nothing new in the manga community.

Pros:-
Art: Art is fine. Nothing more to say.

Pacing: Pacing is fine if to say. No too slow not too fast. I will take that. But it did have moments where the story could have been dragged a little bit but got concluded in only 1 chapter.

Character: Other than MC, I pretty much like all the girls, my favorite one being the most recent girl Mary as she introduces some comedy to the manga. The side characters are not given much panels to judge them.

Enjoyment:-
Started off rough but got smoothed out in the upcoming chapters. Average read tbh for me. Decided to read cause of less chapters but would have dropped it if it had more chapters.